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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2014 13:12:27 GMT -5
“Your mace! What the heck is it made of?” he asked in shock. “Here, I’ll show you!” spat Nephthys as she whacked Alchemy Lad with her ancient weapon, knocking him off of his feet.   |
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Post by mayincatek on Nov 30, 2014 14:42:55 GMT -5
Great choice of Ultra-Humanite as the JSI starter villain. Ultra-Humanite hardly sees action in the mainstream DCU nowadays.
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Post by Dr. Poison on Nov 30, 2014 15:46:02 GMT -5
“Your mace! What the heck is it made of?” he asked in shock. “Here, I’ll show you!” spat Nephthys as she whacked Alchemy Lad with her ancient weapon, knocking him off of his feet. That was my favorite line from this chapter!  |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2014 17:19:20 GMT -5
“Your mace! What the heck is it made of?” he asked in shock. “Here, I’ll show you!” spat Nephthys as she whacked Alchemy Lad with her ancient weapon, knocking him off of his feet. That was my favorite line from this chapter! Same here pal! |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2014 17:20:17 GMT -5
Great choice of Ultra-Humanite as the JSI starter villain. Ultra-Humanite hardly sees action in the mainstream DCU nowadays. You are so right, I've wished they start using him again! |
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Post by mayincatek on Nov 30, 2014 17:56:56 GMT -5
Great choice of Ultra-Humanite as the JSI starter villain. Ultra-Humanite hardly sees action in the mainstream DCU nowadays. You are so right, I've wished they start using him again! Ultra-Humanite as a T-Rex.  KEWL! |
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Post by Earth 2 Flash on Dec 1, 2014 6:10:37 GMT -5
“Your mace! What the heck is it made of?” he asked in shock. “Here, I’ll show you!” spat Nephthys as she whacked Alchemy Lad with her ancient weapon, knocking him off of his feet. I really enjoyed this part too. |
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Post by wildfire2099 on Dec 1, 2014 6:57:26 GMT -5
Very fun 1st storyline, Dr. Poison... quite worthy of the legacy heroes |
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Post by Dr. Poison on Dec 1, 2014 7:52:08 GMT -5
Very fun 1st storyline, Dr. Poison... quite worthy of the legacy heroes Thank you! I hope to continue to do them proud! |
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Post by Wild Card on Dec 1, 2014 15:49:48 GMT -5
Sweet! They won!! <3
I love this, and I knew I didn't have to worry! They rocked! Great ending for the first part. It leaves it on a ominous cliff hanger and acts like the villain didn't actually lose. He totally won, because his plan worked. And, I think that's a really cool twist. Great job, this is so cool! <3
Favorite part: “Your mace! What the heck is it made of?” he asked in shock.
“Here, I’ll show you!” spat Nephthys as she whacked Alchemy Lad with her ancient weapon, knocking him off of his feet.
Also, when they got their bodies back to normal, I made a fist and and whispered "Yes!" and my class (class hadn't started, I promise!) looked at me funny, so I shrugged and responded: "What? They beat The Ultra-Humanite." And, this guy I've never talked to before and sits on the other side of class said: "YEAH!" and came over and high-fived me and it completely random and awesome and I hadn't even noticed he was wearing a Superman shirt, so it just made things so much cooler.
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Post by Dr. Poison on Dec 1, 2014 17:40:54 GMT -5
Sweet! They won!! <3 I love this, and I knew I didn't have to worry! They rocked! Great ending for the first part. It leaves it on a ominous cliff hanger and acts like the villain didn't actually lose. He totally won, because his plan worked. And, I think that's a really cool twist. Great job, this is so cool! <3 Favorite part: “Your mace! What the heck is it made of?” he asked in shock.
“Here, I’ll show you!” spat Nephthys as she whacked Alchemy Lad with her ancient weapon, knocking him off of his feet.Also, when they got their bodies back to normal, I made a fist and and whispered "Yes!" and my class (class hadn't started, I promise!) looked at me funny, so I shrugged and responded: "What? They beat The Ultra-Humanite." And, this guy I've never talked to before and sits on the other side of class said: "YEAH!" and came over and high-fived me and it completely random and awesome and I hadn't even noticed he was wearing a Superman shirt, so it just made things so much cooler. So my story helped get you an audience from a guy in your class? See - they're good for something!  |
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Post by Wild Card on Dec 1, 2014 18:38:47 GMT -5
Sweet! They won!! <3 I love this, and I knew I didn't have to worry! They rocked! Great ending for the first part. It leaves it on a ominous cliff hanger and acts like the villain didn't actually lose. He totally won, because his plan worked. And, I think that's a really cool twist. Great job, this is so cool! <3 Favorite part: “Your mace! What the heck is it made of?” he asked in shock.
“Here, I’ll show you!” spat Nephthys as she whacked Alchemy Lad with her ancient weapon, knocking him off of his feet.Also, when they got their bodies back to normal, I made a fist and and whispered "Yes!" and my class (class hadn't started, I promise!) looked at me funny, so I shrugged and responded: "What? They beat The Ultra-Humanite." And, this guy I've never talked to before and sits on the other side of class said: "YEAH!" and came over and high-fived me and it completely random and awesome and I hadn't even noticed he was wearing a Superman shirt, so it just made things so much cooler. So my story helped get you an audience from a guy in your class? See - they're good for something! Nah, boys are the least of my thoughts! Your story is great for something: being awesome and bringing a community even more together. I mean, we read about heroes, we watch heroes. Stuff like that, but with this? With what you're doing, you've helped us be and create heroes. And that's an awesome thing to do. Not only that, we get to read about our creations and what they do. Not many people get a chance like that. At all. We are very lucky that you're doing this and it's amazing! I'm glad to know I'm not the only one to loves reading these and can't wait for more! So, thanks for this |
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Post by Dr. Poison on Dec 1, 2014 18:55:37 GMT -5
So my story helped get you an audience from a guy in your class? See - they're good for something! Nah, boys are the least of my thoughts! Your story is great for something: being awesome and bringing a community even more together. I mean, we read about heroes, we watch heroes. Stuff like that, but with this? With what you're doing, you've helped us be and create heroes. And that's an awesome thing to do. Not only that, we get to read about our creations and what they do. Not many people get a chance like that. At all. We are very lucky that you're doing this and it's amazing! I'm glad to know I'm not the only one to loves reading these and can't wait for more! So, thanks for this Awww...............you just made me blush. |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 1, 2014 21:52:12 GMT -5
So my story helped get you an audience from a guy in your class? See - they're good for something! Nah, boys are the least of my thoughts! Your story is great for something: being awesome and bringing a community even more together. I mean, we read about heroes, we watch heroes. Stuff like that, but with this? With what you're doing, you've helped us be and create heroes. And that's an awesome thing to do. Not only that, we get to read about our creations and what they do. Not many people get a chance like that. At all. We are very lucky that you're doing this and it's amazing! I'm glad to know I'm not the only one to loves reading these and can't wait for more! So, thanks for this I'm glad you are enjoying the story ... Sabre! |
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Post by mayincatek on Dec 2, 2014 14:34:42 GMT -5
I like that the JSI will feature the heirs of the original DCU Trinity.
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